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Changeset 1137


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Timestamp:
2011-02-22 05:39:55 (3 years ago)
Author:
julian.reschke@gmx.de
Message:

apply editorial improvements suggested by Ben Niven-Jenkins in <http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/ietf-http-wg/2011JanMar/0164.html>, also avoid the word "required" when it's not a keyword (see #137)

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draft-ietf-httpbis/latest
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  • draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p2-semantics.html

    r1136 r1137  
    883883      <h1 id="rfc.section.4"><a href="#rfc.section.4">4.</a>&nbsp;<a id="status.code.and.reason.phrase" href="#status.code.and.reason.phrase">Status Code and Reason Phrase</a></h1> 
    884884      <p id="rfc.section.4.p.1">The Status-Code element is a 3-digit integer result code of the attempt to understand and satisfy the request.</p> 
    885       <p id="rfc.section.4.p.2">The Reason-Phrase is intended to give a short textual description of the Status-Code and is intended for the human user. The 
    886          client is not required to examine or display the Reason-Phrase. 
     885      <p id="rfc.section.4.p.2">The Reason-Phrase is intended to give a short textual description of the Status-Code and is intended for a human user. The 
     886         client does not need to examine or display the Reason-Phrase. 
    887887      </p> 
    888888      <div id="rfc.figure.u.10"></div><pre class="inline"><span id="rfc.iref.g.3"></span><span id="rfc.iref.g.4"></span><span id="rfc.iref.g.5"></span>  <a href="#status.code.and.reason.phrase" class="smpl">Status-Code</a>    = 3<a href="#notation" class="smpl">DIGIT</a> 
     
    895895      </p> 
    896896      <h2 id="rfc.section.4.1"><a href="#rfc.section.4.1">4.1</a>&nbsp;<a id="overview.of.status.codes" href="#overview.of.status.codes">Overview of Status Codes</a></h2> 
    897       <p id="rfc.section.4.1.p.1">The status codes listed below are defined in <a href="#status.codes" title="Status Code Definitions">Section&nbsp;8</a>, <a href="p4-conditional.html#status.code.definitions" title="Status Code Definitions">Section 3</a> of <a href="#Part4" id="rfc.xref.Part4.10"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 4: Conditional Requests">[Part4]</cite></a>, <a href="p5-range.html#status.code.definitions" title="Status Code Definitions">Section 3</a> of <a href="#Part5" id="rfc.xref.Part5.6"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 5: Range Requests and Partial Responses">[Part5]</cite></a>, and <a href="p7-auth.html#status.code.definitions" title="Status Code Definitions">Section 3</a> of <a href="#Part7" id="rfc.xref.Part7.7"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 7: Authentication">[Part7]</cite></a>. The reason phrases listed here are only recommendations — they can be replaced by local equivalents without affecting the 
     897      <p id="rfc.section.4.1.p.1">The status codes listed below are defined in <a href="#status.codes" title="Status Code Definitions">Section&nbsp;8</a> of this specification, <a href="p4-conditional.html#status.code.definitions" title="Status Code Definitions">Section 3</a> of <a href="#Part4" id="rfc.xref.Part4.10"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 4: Conditional Requests">[Part4]</cite></a>, <a href="p5-range.html#status.code.definitions" title="Status Code Definitions">Section 3</a> of <a href="#Part5" id="rfc.xref.Part5.6"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 5: Range Requests and Partial Responses">[Part5]</cite></a>, and <a href="p7-auth.html#status.code.definitions" title="Status Code Definitions">Section 3</a> of <a href="#Part7" id="rfc.xref.Part7.7"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 7: Authentication">[Part7]</cite></a>. The reason phrases listed here are only recommendations — they can be replaced by local equivalents without affecting the 
    898898         protocol. 
    899899      </p> 
  • draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p2-semantics.xml

    r1136 r1137  
    576576<t> 
    577577   The Reason-Phrase is intended to give a short textual description of the 
    578    Status-Code and is intended for the human user. The client is not required 
     578   Status-Code and is intended for a human user. The client does not need 
    579579   to examine or display the Reason-Phrase. 
    580580</t> 
     
    601601<section title="Overview of Status Codes" anchor="overview.of.status.codes"> 
    602602<t>   
    603    The status codes listed below are defined in <xref target="status.codes"/>, 
    604    &p4-status-codes;, &p5-status-codes;, and &p7-status-codes;. The reason 
    605    phrases listed here are only recommendations &mdash; they can be replaced 
    606    by local equivalents without affecting the protocol. 
     603   The status codes listed below are defined in <xref target="status.codes"/> 
     604   of this specification, &p4-status-codes;, &p5-status-codes;, and &p7-status-codes;. 
     605   The reason phrases listed here are only recommendations &mdash; they can be 
     606   replaced by local equivalents without affecting the protocol. 
    607607</t> 
    608608<texttable align="left"> 
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